Tuesday, 4 April 2017

tip top

Tip top the ti is for the time to change use this when you want to move from now to then the p means for place and change this is found every time you move around. to is for topic this is due when you mention some thing new.the p is for person this would fit when some one else and stands for. Here is an example
later that day john realised he had made a mistak heres another example its my turn said sarah and this
is the last one l can believe you did that shouted natalie what do you think time place topic person this is
a story about tip top and write about the things that read this i will be very happy. i think this is a good story
to write about you can use this in your good story  to write  about you can use this in your story if you do that is great. your story will make sence in the end this is a story about tip top.

Thursday, 2 March 2017

Sing

Once upone a time there was a monkey that wanted to sing but his mum won't let him so he snuck out and found a poster with a microphone on it.He went home and stuck the poster on the wall he thought he could do it so he did he thought what the song could be about. A few days later he had an idea the song was gonna be called happy Because who didn't like happy it makes you feel happy he thought it was a amazing idea so he took weeks to write it down so he said to himself "today is the day of the competition yay!""Hopefully the judges will be impressed "so he took a big deep breath and went on stage and smiled. His mum came to watch the new singer she got very angry when her son entered the competition then she thought it is a quiet a nice voice ". She was proud of him.